Tuesday, August 13, 2019
Supreme Speeches
This is my speech. It's about whether New Zealand's efforts against plastic are making an impact on the rest of the world. I wrote about this because I thought that people need more understanding on the seriousness of the plastic issue. The thing that I did well was beginning and ending with a power sentence. One thing I could do to improve my speech would be to add some more facts.
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Kia Ora Lucy,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Uinisieti and I am a yr 8 student attending St Patrick's School in Panmure. I like the way you explained the reasons why plastic bags are not good for our earth. I also like how you gave a lot of information that would get peoples attention and start caring for our planet earth.
If you would like to see my blog is, https://spsuinisietif.blogspot.com/.